Insanity of Xade's beginning rewrite

[Xade]

ive been thinking about rewriting the first 11 pages. In particular Page 10's dialog before the quackduck attacks, and possibly adding an intro box or two, like on page 2 "Alex Welex, a Potlight cop that really has to go" and instead of having him standing there have him running like mad to the back of the sign. I don't want to change the page count because of the drunk duck mirror's clunky way of moving the pages around, so it has to stay at 11 pages. So any ideas?


(it will be in 3d btw, I've been working on the models in my free time. I have the sign, I need the bushes and the terrain.)

[Wheels]

Welcome to the board Xade. Your right next door!

[Xade]

thanks wheels, I kinda stalled out on what to say, so I just posted a problem i had, hoping to sneak in unannounced. I'm proud to say I failed miserably

[littlebeast]

because of the drunk duck mirror's clunky way of moving the pages around

Don't remind me....